Design for print/ Design for Web: Progress Crit

I brought to the crit my net example, and my ideas for what to do for web and print as well as my design sheets to show people my ideas.

I got some good feedback during the crit concerning both design for print & web. 

Print:

good idea to make to referable after graduation

consideration of packaging is interesting (screen packaging)

Inclusion of other products is interesting.

Make it a reference book yes.

"Put it in print" sounds good!

Keep time a consideration.

Don't over crowd the poster with to much information.

Envelope of stock is a great idea.

Web: 

Families are my audience

Family games / elderly games/ Drinking games

Keep it minimal

No dice games is a good idea, keeps it specific.

Infographic element is good because it helps make it easily understood.

No need for a home page / holding page.

Action plan: 

Print/

I need to build on making it a referenceable book based around putting documents into print. "Put it in print" If I have the time consider making the poster but don't put to much information onto it. 

Web/

Make families my target audience all the while keeping it minimal. I'll focus the games down to be non-gamling and non-dice games to keep it applicable to families.